traditional flash sheet – sailor jerry inspired

[alligator eye]

Hello. this is a work in progress. i still have to color some of it. what does everyone think so far?

[Ramenuzumaki]

lookin good
i see you like the new school style :)

[alligator eye]

ummm sorry Ramen. This would be “traditional” inspired by sailor jerry. i need to finish it, but you can see the design is in place.

[Ramenuzumaki]

Your eagle and dagger look more new school than traditional. Traditional designs are very specific with how they are drawn. They arent warped, or curved, or exaggerated in any way.

notice the difference between this eagle and yours?

http://s1.hubimg.com/u/621128_f520.jpg

yours looks more cartoony than this one

notice in the below image how the daggers and the skulls keep their normal shapes? your dagger, and skull are bent and twisted, and again looking cartoony. I specialise in the old school traditional style.
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-_dHe6JqR6dE/To6X5KWcEaI/AAAAAAAADqc/-IsAhe7PHhg/s1600/sailor_jerry15.jpg

[alligator eye]

thats funny because this literally was from one of Sailor Jerry’s flash sets. traditional has lots of curves and lines. thats what the beauty is., the simple line/design. here i posted it .

[Ramenuzumaki]

Then i see it’s not inspired by Sailor Jerry its copied from Sailor Jerry :P

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